[identity profile] caras-galadhon.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] slashababy
To the lovely person who wrote Stainless Steel Christmas,

The very fact that you wrote VigBeanDuck for me means you have my undying affection. *happysigh* Thank you so, so much!

To adequately illustrate how much I enjoyed this wonderful story, I think you should know my very first response on reading was: "*meeble* Good lord, Richard's KISSING Sean! Oh good fucking lord. *whimper* I... I should feel dirty and ashamed, right? I mean, he's such a SWEET man. I mean, he's a doll... And... he's got his cock in Viggo's mouth. *THUD*"

This was a wonderful read, with lots and lots of lines that made me chuckle and smile, as well as one hell of a sex scene that will be running through my head for days and days. *meep* And the ending was sweet and lovely.

There are so many things to love about this fic, and so many lines that jumped right out and grabbed me.

This--
'Do you have some sort of kinky fantasy about hot, manly welders from Sheffield?'
I have a fantasy about hot men from Sheffield,' Orlando yells from the other side of the catering tent. 'You want to hear it?'

--made me giggle. I could absolutely picture it, from Sean's suggestive tone to Orlando's eager shout across the tent. It really made me wonder how serious Orlando was in his joke, too. ^_~

While the whole fic is wonderful, this--
This meant that for a few nights Sean had been planted in the corner of the workshop with strict instructions not to watch and not to intervene unless Viggo was actually on fire.
--is probably my very favourite line. *G* It made me laugh, and it was pitch-perfect. Hee. I can just see Viggo admonishing Sean not to get involved unless he was in flames, and Sean snorting and rolling his eyes as he agreed.

But then, ohhhh, we get to the really, really hot stuff. *whimper*--
Sean's answer was firm open handed slap on Viggo's jean clad arse.
'I knew you'd get the idea,' moans Viggo, the sudden stinging pain sending shivers of pleasure shooting up his spine, 'There should be some more of that, really, just so I learn my lesson properly.'

--*meeble* Good lord, yes please!

You know, I've always had this taste for Richard!fic, but there's so little of it out there that I never actually realized how hot a VigBeanDuck threesome would be.

Richard looks down and locks his gaze with Viggo's wide blue eyes. 'You are so very good at that,' he croons softly, his hand caressing his cheek as he slips his cock between Viggo's lips.
I think... I think I lost coherency at that point, because oh, the picture you've painted here, Viggo trapped between Sean and Richard, Richard's quiet voice accompanying the slow slide of his cock into Viggo's mouth... *THUD*

Richard leans forward and steals a quick kiss from Sean as his cock is engulfed in the hot suction of Viggo's talented mouth.
And then you go and give me DuckBean kissing! *adores you* *fans self*

'I'll try not to disturb you when I'm woken at six am by someone complaining about not having enough spears,' says Richard, leading the other two men to the back room.
And right after all that hotness (which I'm still recovering from), you bring us right back around to lighthearted laughter. I loved that line, and could absolutely hear Richard delivering it in a dry, humorous and matter-of-fact tone. I can only imagine how often Richard's been pulled from bed early for some film-or-death matter, and how much more difficult it must be when he's sharing his bed with Viggo and Sean!

'It's a picture of Elijah, just so you don't miss him while you are apart.' Orlando looks up and is about to speak before Viggo puts a finger on his lips. 'The pair of you are so obvious you might as well have sent out a press release.
A really touching moment. I love how you've delineated the world beyond Viggo and Sean, and have brought in other loves and relationships with such deft touches. Awww. Orlando/Elijah! ♥ How sweet!

And oh, I thought the end was really quite lovely, right down to such an inventive sculpture from Viggo. I love that he chose welding as his medium, and how appropriate that is, as well as the end result. Additionally, I adored the fact that there's a future beyond NZ for them. *siiiiigh* Really, really wonderful, the whole thing.

Thank you so, so, so much! I'll be revisiting this story over and over and over again, I just know it. ♥
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