msilverstar: (billy push-pull)
msilverstar ([personal profile] msilverstar) wrote in [community profile] slashababy2005-12-25 03:01 pm
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fb for "Hindsight"

Hindsight is lovely Elijah/Dom angst, set in LA, fall 2003. Elijah's voice is very strong and his feelings are beautifully conveyed. The stylistic choice works very well, and it rewards a second read.

[identity profile] herm42.livejournal.com 2005-12-26 08:47 pm (UTC)(link)
very very creative and punchy and wow. loved the style.

(Anonymous) 2005-12-29 06:49 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you. It makes me happy to know you liked Hindsight so much.

(Anonymous) 2005-12-27 09:25 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! So much. A big part of the pleasure of the slashababy exchange for me is giving pleasure to someone else, and I'm so glad the story gave some to you.

*hugs*

[identity profile] jocondite.livejournal.com 2005-12-27 02:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Mmm, I really enjoyed Hindsight. It was deliciously painful. Beautifully, beautifully written. And the section with the icecream rather jerked my heart out of my chest and gave it a vicious twist, in the most exhilaratingly excellent way. I love that bit - and, well, the whole thing - madly.

(Anonymous) 2005-12-29 06:50 am (UTC)(link)
Oh. You say the sweetest things. Thank you.