Oh yay! Thank you to the Mods for the early posting and thank you very much to my writer! I love your story.
"There ain't anything to see here, you idiot." ==> This just made me smile because it's so silly and warm and real.
But his lips grazed Viggo's temple, pressing a soft kiss at the edge of his hairline. ==> And this is just lovely. Such a small gesture but so intimate.
Like this, surrounded by near-complete darkness and the silence of the forest, Viggo could make believe that they were the only people in the world. They could do whatever they wanted, witnessed only by the trees around them and the cold air that teased at their skins. ==> So gentle and evocative. Lovely.
And then to be followed by THIS:
If they were the only ones left surviving, he knew that the two of them would end up killing each other by the end of the month. And that was an optimistic guess. ==> LOVE, LOVE, LOVE!
"Vig, you get lost two feet away from your own house. I have a self-preservation instinct." ==> *snort*
...and his slow, small smile was beautiful to see. ==> And yes, happy shivers did ensue at this image...
“We're going to have sex on the rug now,” Sean informed him. ==> I expect Viggo was perfectly happy to acquiesce!
What a delightful story. Thank you! I love the playfulness and underlying love and lust. You've made them very real and I love the homage to Viggo's 'Lost" pictures. I have a big smile on my face now. Thank you for putting it there! *hugs*
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"There ain't anything to see here, you idiot." ==> This just made me smile because it's so silly and warm and real.
But his lips grazed Viggo's temple, pressing a soft kiss at the edge of his hairline. ==> And this is just lovely. Such a small gesture but so intimate.
Like this, surrounded by near-complete darkness and the silence of the forest, Viggo could make believe that they were the only people in the world. They could do whatever they wanted, witnessed only by the trees around them and the cold air that teased at their skins. ==> So gentle and evocative. Lovely.
And then to be followed by THIS:
If they were the only ones left surviving, he knew that the two of them would end up killing each other by the end of the month. And that was an optimistic guess. ==> LOVE, LOVE, LOVE!
"Vig, you get lost two feet away from your own house. I have a self-preservation instinct." ==> *snort*
...and his slow, small smile was beautiful to see. ==> And yes, happy shivers did ensue at this image...
“We're going to have sex on the rug now,” Sean informed him. ==> I expect Viggo was perfectly happy to acquiesce!
What a delightful story. Thank you! I love the playfulness and underlying love and lust. You've made them very real and I love the homage to Viggo's 'Lost" pictures. I have a big smile on my face now. Thank you for putting it there! *hugs*